WALT: Describe a moment in time in detail.
I heard the engine in front of me. It sounded like 5000000000 elephants running on the street, STOMP, BANG ,ROAR! I heard the screeching on the concrete from the tyres.
I saw the smoke around the car. The colour of the smoke was white I saw the black tyres marks on the concrete.
I felt awesome because it was the coolest thing in the world.
I could do this for hours. One day i want to have a Formula One car.
I wondered if i could do the biggest drift in the world.