Thursday 6 July 2017

the doodle

chapter 6
The doodle died RIP doodle.The coffin and the hearse is getting paid for by Carter. The funeral director cleans the doodle and dresses the doodle. Today is a very sad day. At the funeral a haiku is said.
I love you I wish
you were alive you egg head  
Can you please be here
Nobody cried so I wrote another one .
I need you, come back
the funniest guy ever

so please came back egg

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  1. Anonymous15 September 2017 at 09:45

    Talofa Lava Reed, my name is Alfred and I'm from Waikowhai Primary School and I'm in room Manukau. I really liked reading your story about The Doodle. My favourite part of the story is when he said "I wish you were alive egg head :D If you would like to see what I have been doing on my blog go to wpsalfredk.blogspot.co.nz

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