Friday 26 August 2016

Olympic Moment in time



WALT: Describe a moment in time in detail.

 I am In the RIO 2016 Olympics games.I  line up at the starting line 321 go we  were off .The Men's running  finally  started the finishing line was getting closer I won. My heart is racing. Then the medal ceremony  was on I was Nervous then they called my name  I went up they gave me a gold medal.
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  1. Rhys29 August 2016 at 11:19

    Hi Reed i like the way it was easy to read it.Next time you could
    write what event you are racing in at the beginning. starts. by

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