Friday, 16 June 2017

the doodle chapter 3


Carter looked up. His face was red and his neck was puffing up. His body was starting to grow. His pants and top were ripping he is hulk. His veins are pop like eels.


 Everyone runs and  Carter destroyed the whole  City.  He used his Hulk powers and shot green goo out of his eyeballs. Stomps on buildings and smashes walls and trucks and cars. He is out of control.


What do we do now? We run.  The whole world is destroyed Hulk smashed all the buildings but 3 building stayed up the army tries to kill Hulk but they can't so the army and Airforce and the navy try to kill Hulk but they still can't so the doodle comes in with an AK47 and shoot the Hulk   down but the Hulk got back up and he was a Good Guy.

Thursday, 1 June 2017

Boom Writer Chapter 2

         The person that was being mean (Carter) is back in class. The guy with the notebook is going to try and get his drawing to get back at Carter for being mean to him. 

“Haha Carter I have a gun” said the drawing“Hurry up, draw me a gun”I drew a pistol“Draw the bullets” he asked. I didn’t know how to draw bullets so I just drew hotdogs. The doodle has hot dogs for bullets now. I quickly write a haiku. 

Carter you egg head I hate you I hope you die in pain. 

Pio pio! The bullets or hot dogs hit him. “Yuck” he screams loudly. The mustard hits his eyes it burns. Sauce dripped down his brand new shirt, the cheese sticks to his hair. “RIP Carter hahahahaha” the drawing said. Carter turns around and sees me laughing too. Carter's angry face looks like a armadillo and a zebra and a lion all mixed up. 

I ran out of the class and he jumps back in the book. I should probably give him a name. His name is Ricky. Ricky Baker. I run to the carpark and hotwire Mr McAulay’s Navara. I jump in and take off doing a big burn out in Carter's face.  He jumps in his hilux and stalls it. I laugh. I quickly write another  haiku. 

Carter I hope you crash and die in flames.